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Commission - A dance with the Moon

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 Commission for LunarEquinox of her beautiful character! 

 I had a lot of fun drawing her, I think she's super cute! I hope I got everything right, please let me know if there's anything you'd like me to change! 

 If you like the result, please pay on the Commission Widget on my page with your name on it!

Cattura by Kalimoo-Art


 You can find her character here 
  LunarEquinox by LunarEquinox
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2000x1700px 2.37 MB
© 2018 - 2024 Elena-Naqua
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hello! I adore how serene and calming this scene looks, which means it's effectively, impactful, and also your intentions and emotions you're trying to convey really got through. I'd say when it comes to execution of the concept, it's fairly well done, good job!

As much as the execution of the concept was done beautifully, I'll have to say, your shading placement and harshness of the shadows and lighting need some work; the closest body part would have the harshest lighting and shadows, while the farthest would have it gradually less harsh. You;ll also need to define the wings, specifically the clump of feathers you decided to draw, and make it pop a bit more. That way, its more impactful and there will be more definition to your art.

Overall though, as ive said before, it's well done, keep up the good work!